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Are you still inclined to continue this? The story seems like it has potential, mixing geek culture with the "small business taking on the big corporation" sorta story, curious to see where you're going with this. The characters also seem interesting so far and I'd definitely want to learn to know them more. I was worried Joe would turn out to be the "wacky hobo" character, but was pleasantly surprised he was a more grounded character (nothing wrong with wacky hoboes I guess, just feels a bit overplayed is all) and his "take me with you!" got a laugh out of me. If I'd give a few pointers, I'd say backgrounds are a bit too simple sometimes, they do describe the environments well (you're never lost as a reader), but because the rest of the art is great, it'd feel like a waste to have the BGs merely going for the "bare minimum" on the requirement scale. Otherwise, good so far. I'll probably check out Pixel later.